Snow White's last wish
Forum Home > Public : Stories > Snow White's last wishPage: 1
More than 10 years passed after Magic Mirror said that not the queen, but Snow White was the most beautiful woman in the world. The queen could endure no more that Snow White become more and more beautiful, so decided to kill her.
After some days, somebody who had a letter which would be sent to the prince of the enemy state was captured. The letter said some national secrets, and said Snow White informed those national secrets for wanting love of that prince. Snow White denied writing such letter, but the handwriting of the letter was completely same as that of Snow White. To make matters worse, Snow White had been continuously insisting on reconciling with the enemy state.
Snow White was sentenced to beheading execution for the treason crime.
On next day, at the center of main square of the capital city, a stage for the beheading execution of Snow White set up.
While Snow White was escorted to that stage, all of the people exetremely jeered to her, "You ugly traitor! You dirty bitch!" Because Snow White had been loved from all of people in the kingdom before, their anger was very and very big.
Snow White did last speech.
"I will die because of the sin I never committed. But, though I don't know who manipulated my sin, I forgive all of them. I hope I will be the last convict bleeding innocent blood. Now, I will follow my fate."
Angry voices of the people was much more bigger, but the princess calmly continued her saying.
"Could you display my decapitated head to public eternally, even after my innocence will be found out? I want to my decapitated head to be the sign showing no more person is falsely charged in this country."
Executioners stripped all of Snow White's garments. She did not show any resistance. The 18-year-young princess' slim and fresh nudity which not even one bit of thread was dressed on, was dazzled very very white like snow in the sunlight. Angry voices started to be a little, just a little bit lower.
The executioners tried to bind Snow White's nudity by ropes, but she said very politely. "Please, don't bind me. Even if you will not bind me, I will obediently get my beheading execution."
Snow White obediently but elegantly knelt down on the execution stage by herself. Her straight-stretched long and slim legs was folded, so her ample hips laid above the cute feet. On the smooth thigh, her lightly together-hold hands laid. Between two of her slender arms, very very glamourous white breasts and cute pink nipples were totally exposed.
Above straight-stretched shoulder, was the long and delicate white neck to be severed soon by the sword. And above the neck, was the most beautiful face in the world, which was white like snow, and whose lips was red like blood. The hair above the beautiful face was very very black like ebony.
All of this beauty of Snow White's body was Snow White's true "sin" of "causing" her to get brutal beheading execution. Of course, among the crowd packing totally the main square, the person who knew this "fact" was only one person.
Despite of she would be decapitated soon, Snow White's face showed not even a bit of fear, and her knelt body showed not even a bit of trembling. Angry voices of the crowd became lower. The chief executioner stood at the left behind of Snow White's nudity, and lifted his sword high.
Such like cutting jelly, at just one stroke, the chief executioner cleanly severed Snow White's long and tender white neck. Even at the very moment that her own neck was severed, Snow White did not yell any scream.
Bleeding blood, Snow White's decapitated head dropped vertically. From the neck-cut stump of her very very white nudity, red blood, which was very very red such like her lips, was violently spouted 3 or 4 feet like a fountain. At the very moment that Snow White's decapitated head dropped to the ground of the execution stage, her beautiful headless nudity collapsed right direction. Now, only silence was over the main square.
Executioners erected a pole was erected. At about 7 feet height point of the pole, by separately tying the slender ankle, they reversely hung Snow white's slim, fresh and beautiful headless nudity. Between the straight-stretched slim legs, small cute lips keeping virginity well, was totally exposed.
At the top of that pole, they exhibited Snow White's decapitated head by hanging high. Even though she already died horribly by getting beheading execution, Snow white's face was still the most beautiful in the world, and maintained serenity, and did not show any trace of the pain of the very moment of having been decapitated.
Even though the intention of infinite exhibiting Snow White's decapitated head and headless nudity was to give infinite humiliation even to Snow White's decapitated and naked corpse, no one insulted or sexually harassed her beautiful naked corpse,
Originally, the corpse of the convicts of treason was prohibited being buried. But, the 7th day of exhibiting Snow White's decapitated head, the queen announced that she gave a little mercy to Snow White, so would bury her head and headless corpse separately like normal convicts executed by beheading.
In the night of that day, Snow white's decapitate head laid on the small shelf in the queen's private room, and her white headless nudity laid down on a bed in the same room.
"Mirror, Mirror. Who is the most beautiful woman in the world?"
Magic Mirror answered, "Your Majesty, you are the most beautiful woman in the world." She heard such an answer again after more than ten years.
The queen smiled broadly and spoke to Snow White's decapitated head.
"You said though you didn't know who manipulated your sin, you forgive all of them. You just need to forgive only one woman, that is, me. And I am convinced that I am truly forgiven by you, for no traces of resentment existed on your face.
Snow White, your decapitated head and your headless nudity are very very beautiful, so must not be decayed, and must be preserved well. By my magic, I will maintain your face and body be young and beautiful eternally."
After 10 years, the fact that the queen was secretly keeping Snow White's decapitated head and headless naked corpse was caught. Due to the doubt about the reason of the queen's such act, the re-investigation on Snow White's treason crime was done, so the fact that the queen manipulated Snow White's treason crime.
Just after the deposed queen was executed by beheading, the angry crowd trampled her naked corpse.
On Snow White's white headless nudity, the beautiful shroud was dressed, and it was buried at good place. However, people were reminded of Snow White's last word. So, they exhibited Snow White's decapitated head again at the center of the main square of the capital city.
Even though long time passed after she got beheading execution, Snow White's face looked like being alive or being freshly decapitated, and was still the most beautiful one in the world. Even if not any embalming was done after that time, Snow White's face eternally kept the beauty same as the time she had been alive.
And, as long as Snow White's face was maintaining beautiful, in that country, no person was falsely charged.
After some days, somebody who had a letter which would be sent to the prince of the enemy state was captured. The letter said some national secrets, and said Snow White informed those national secrets for wanting love of that prince. Snow White denied writing such letter, but the handwriting of the letter was completely same as that of Snow White. To make matters worse, Snow White had been continuously insisting on reconciling with the enemy state.
Snow White was sentenced to beheading execution for the treason crime.
On next day, at the center of main square of the capital city, a stage for the beheading execution of Snow White set up.
While Snow White was escorted to that stage, all of the people exetremely jeered to her, "You ugly traitor! You dirty bitch!" Because Snow White had been loved from all of people in the kingdom before, their anger was very and very big.
Snow White did last speech.
"I will die because of the sin I never committed. But, though I don't know who manipulated my sin, I forgive all of them. I hope I will be the last convict bleeding innocent blood. Now, I will follow my fate."
Angry voices of the people was much more bigger, but the princess calmly continued her saying.
"Could you display my decapitated head to public eternally, even after my innocence will be found out? I want to my decapitated head to be the sign showing no more person is falsely charged in this country."
Executioners stripped all of Snow White's garments. She did not show any resistance. The 18-year-young princess' slim and fresh nudity which not even one bit of thread was dressed on, was dazzled very very white like snow in the sunlight. Angry voices started to be a little, just a little bit lower.
The executioners tried to bind Snow White's nudity by ropes, but she said very politely. "Please, don't bind me. Even if you will not bind me, I will obediently get my beheading execution."
Snow White obediently but elegantly knelt down on the execution stage by herself. Her straight-stretched long and slim legs was folded, so her ample hips laid above the cute feet. On the smooth thigh, her lightly together-hold hands laid. Between two of her slender arms, very very glamourous white breasts and cute pink nipples were totally exposed.
Above straight-stretched shoulder, was the long and delicate white neck to be severed soon by the sword. And above the neck, was the most beautiful face in the world, which was white like snow, and whose lips was red like blood. The hair above the beautiful face was very very black like ebony.
All of this beauty of Snow White's body was Snow White's true "sin" of "causing" her to get brutal beheading execution. Of course, among the crowd packing totally the main square, the person who knew this "fact" was only one person.
Despite of she would be decapitated soon, Snow White's face showed not even a bit of fear, and her knelt body showed not even a bit of trembling. Angry voices of the crowd became lower. The chief executioner stood at the left behind of Snow White's nudity, and lifted his sword high.
Such like cutting jelly, at just one stroke, the chief executioner cleanly severed Snow White's long and tender white neck. Even at the very moment that her own neck was severed, Snow White did not yell any scream.
Bleeding blood, Snow White's decapitated head dropped vertically. From the neck-cut stump of her very very white nudity, red blood, which was very very red such like her lips, was violently spouted 3 or 4 feet like a fountain. At the very moment that Snow White's decapitated head dropped to the ground of the execution stage, her beautiful headless nudity collapsed right direction. Now, only silence was over the main square.
Executioners erected a pole was erected. At about 7 feet height point of the pole, by separately tying the slender ankle, they reversely hung Snow white's slim, fresh and beautiful headless nudity. Between the straight-stretched slim legs, small cute lips keeping virginity well, was totally exposed.
At the top of that pole, they exhibited Snow White's decapitated head by hanging high. Even though she already died horribly by getting beheading execution, Snow white's face was still the most beautiful in the world, and maintained serenity, and did not show any trace of the pain of the very moment of having been decapitated.
Even though the intention of infinite exhibiting Snow White's decapitated head and headless nudity was to give infinite humiliation even to Snow White's decapitated and naked corpse, no one insulted or sexually harassed her beautiful naked corpse,
Originally, the corpse of the convicts of treason was prohibited being buried. But, the 7th day of exhibiting Snow White's decapitated head, the queen announced that she gave a little mercy to Snow White, so would bury her head and headless corpse separately like normal convicts executed by beheading.
In the night of that day, Snow white's decapitate head laid on the small shelf in the queen's private room, and her white headless nudity laid down on a bed in the same room.
"Mirror, Mirror. Who is the most beautiful woman in the world?"
Magic Mirror answered, "Your Majesty, you are the most beautiful woman in the world." She heard such an answer again after more than ten years.
The queen smiled broadly and spoke to Snow White's decapitated head.
"You said though you didn't know who manipulated your sin, you forgive all of them. You just need to forgive only one woman, that is, me. And I am convinced that I am truly forgiven by you, for no traces of resentment existed on your face.
Snow White, your decapitated head and your headless nudity are very very beautiful, so must not be decayed, and must be preserved well. By my magic, I will maintain your face and body be young and beautiful eternally."
After 10 years, the fact that the queen was secretly keeping Snow White's decapitated head and headless naked corpse was caught. Due to the doubt about the reason of the queen's such act, the re-investigation on Snow White's treason crime was done, so the fact that the queen manipulated Snow White's treason crime.
Just after the deposed queen was executed by beheading, the angry crowd trampled her naked corpse.
On Snow White's white headless nudity, the beautiful shroud was dressed, and it was buried at good place. However, people were reminded of Snow White's last word. So, they exhibited Snow White's decapitated head again at the center of the main square of the capital city.
Even though long time passed after she got beheading execution, Snow White's face looked like being alive or being freshly decapitated, and was still the most beautiful one in the world. Even if not any embalming was done after that time, Snow White's face eternally kept the beauty same as the time she had been alive.
And, as long as Snow White's face was maintaining beautiful, in that country, no person was falsely charged.
I'm not really interested in beheading stories, but I'll give feedback because you asked.
I actually prefer the older version of this story because I find it more coherent and poetic. As for this revised version, it contains many of the grammar mistakes and strange choice of words that I've seen in your other writing.
For example:
- Glamorous white breasts. The word glamorous means 'attractive or appealing in an exotic or exciting way.' It's used to describe things like people, lifestyles, careers, and objects. Never a person's individual body parts.
- Beheading execution. Combining these two words makes sense the first time, but having them repeated throughout the story makes them redundant.
- Headless nudity. Another pair of words that I've seen in your other stories. Nudity is an abstract noun that means the state of being naked, so it technically can't be 'headless.'
- Treason crime shows up twice in one sentence, which isn't necessary.
There are other mistakes I haven't mentioned, so I hope you don't become disheartened. You have potential as long as you keep improving your English.
I actually prefer the older version of this story because I find it more coherent and poetic. As for this revised version, it contains many of the grammar mistakes and strange choice of words that I've seen in your other writing.
For example:
- Glamorous white breasts. The word glamorous means 'attractive or appealing in an exotic or exciting way.' It's used to describe things like people, lifestyles, careers, and objects. Never a person's individual body parts.
- Beheading execution. Combining these two words makes sense the first time, but having them repeated throughout the story makes them redundant.
- Headless nudity. Another pair of words that I've seen in your other stories. Nudity is an abstract noun that means the state of being naked, so it technically can't be 'headless.'
- Treason crime shows up twice in one sentence, which isn't necessary.
There are other mistakes I haven't mentioned, so I hope you don't become disheartened. You have potential as long as you keep improving your English.
Page: 1
Forum > Public / Stories > Snow White's last wish